The genre of the piece that I want to revise is my haiku. The poem is about pie and thanksgiving. The idea came out because it was thanksgiving time. Instead of pumkin pie, I would like to change it to apple pie.
Thanksgiving by: Tanner S.
Thanksgiving is here.
I can smell the pumkin pie.
Yummy, pie is good.
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