Friday, January 22, 2010

first semester portfolio- peice id like to revise

The genre of the piece that I want to revise is my haiku. The poem is about pie and thanksgiving. The idea came out because it was thanksgiving time. Instead of pumkin pie, I would like to change it to apple pie.

Thanksgiving by: Tanner S.

Thanksgiving is here.
I can smell the pumkin pie.
Yummy, pie is good.

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